"Where are you", he's speaking on phone then pause for awhile and,"Ok I'm waiting here come soon". He embrace himself with the package he is holding, seemsthat he fear that he think that someone might steal it form him. He look at his watch and then to his pacakge, looking to his left. Just then a beautiful lady approach him and said."Sorry I was stuck with something couldn;t come early", he gave her a smile and says."It's ok". She can see the package in his hand and ask about it,he dint answer except for the smile on his face. There was complete silence for a while but both were enjoying every bit of it. She act like she don't have any interest in the package but her eyes were moving hence and forth, he gave her a smile and hand over her the package and sais,"This is for you". She took the package and, "Awwww..this is so beautiful", she said to him embracing the umbrella, "I hope you like it, people says that black umbrella is the most effective so I bought black," he said to her with a smile on his face and glittering eyes, She nods to him that she completely love it.
The lightning stuck again, she tries to look at the man in dark, she turn around and have a glance at the colorfull umbrella. She look at her left then to right and was thinking of going but she again look back. The rain is now almost getting ready to sleep, a bit of light is yawning, then her phone rings she answer,"I haven't reached home, thanks for the umbrella".
good one, try to pour some emotions :)
ReplyDeletethanks and will try ;)
ReplyDeletewhy do you choose the colour of umbrella as black. any meaning for that?? i'm not clear the relations of the girl with that who has given the umblrela :)
ReplyDeleteI choose black coz black is the best and I left the thing to the reader about the relation of the two person however I write as colorful umbrella cause I want to see it through the girl mind that she was so happy about the gift that she look the umbrella as colorful :)
ReplyDeletepresent continuous... in ur style of writing.... thts wht it give life to ur art... bravo.. keep it up...
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